The January Ballet
Across Saint Gabriel's Mountainlimbs of miststretch and lift -- dissolveinto a troupe of dancers,an encampment of swanswith a hunter who pursues them.His cross bow-- the cresent moonfixed on a...
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I can picture all of these images across and through the mountains and sky. I love the cresent moon as a cross bow and this: "laid aside like arrows that have been aimed elsewhere, dissenting from his...
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"stunned by the breadthof song transmutingweather and wearinessinto a divine morning,this newest year"Wendy,That's how this poem leaves me.It scales the heights and touches heaven,taking the reader...
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Wendy, I agree with the others that this poem deserves the highest praise; it is a poem with the stamp of humanity written all over it. Btw, did you mean "then" for "than"? Today blessed us with two...
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Wendy, I know I am going to come back to this one since the imagery contained here can be interpreted so many different ways. This is lovely with some things that you see so clearly. Wonderful work!...
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You make the beginning of New Year sound the perfect start Wendy and I hope your year will be happy and blessed.
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Wendy, " . . . I fall from sleep's shadow - stunned" Now . . . me too. Powerful, beautiful.
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did you hear about the massacre last week in Switzerland - this gives your crossbow a sinister slant...
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Gwen,Now that I've actually heard your voice, it resonates throughout this poem creating almost music.Enjoyed your creation today.Jan
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Kerri I am so glad you enjoyed the images in this poem and the experience. Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your impressions. I deeply appreciate them!! Sarah your knd words and enthusiam...
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